Chapter 92: Betrayal [#7seriesofwriting]

Wednesday, September 12, 2018

#7seriesofwriting 1: Love [click here]
#7seriesofwriting 2: Lonely [click here]
#7seriesofwriting 3: Jealousy [click here]

credits: Wirianna
Trying to put the words by words...
There's lots in this messy mind..
Yup, it was never empty...
Hang on... This is not a poetry..
But this is just a way, to see where my mind is going...

How do you portray a betrayal in a first place..?
Would it be, when your sister eats good foods and left none for you..?
Or maybe...
When all of your family when on a vacation without you..?

They're not a betrayal to you..?
Okay perhaps not..
But it's disappointing.. Right..?

A disappointment might sound as the worst feelings in life...
But to be honest..
A betrayal would left the worst feeling ever..
It's an unspoken feelings, which could not be portrayed at all...

Have you ever been in a situation..
Where you trusted ones, sharing the secrets but then you got to know that there's no more secrets left..?
Or maybe, when you got to know that someone that you loved, was no longer fully yours..?
What about, when your soul loved someone, but ended up you got to know that the other half was mended or married to another person..?

There's no words to describe those feelings..
And when it happened..
All you would do is to cry...
Hoping that you could rewind the time..
And fix everything...

Could you ever say a word to portray the words..?
No, right..?
It remained unknown in the life's dictionary...
Which is why it's the worst feelings ever..!

People could say...
"If life gives you lemon, make a lemonade..!"
But when you're betrayed..
There's no time for a lemonade..
As the lemon itself had wound you deeply...

Would you love to join me for a sesh of lemonade...?
written by;
-Flavnesz @ Chapters_ 5.33 p.m.-


  1. Replies
    1. This lightens up my day.. hehe.. Thank you..🙈

  2. Betrayal is backstabbing . Imagine the pain.

  3. I'm curious to find out what blog platform you have been working with?
    I'm experiencing some minor security issues with my latest site and I'd like to find something more secure.
    Do you have any solutions?

    1. Umm.. Not sure which platform is the best but I'm fine with Blogger..

  4. Sakit dia hanya Tuhan je yang tau. Tak terjemah dengan kata2

    1. Betul kak Ana.. Perasaan tu memang tak terluah.. Tak leh nnak gambarkan pun.. 💔

  5. both disappointment n betrayal i guess bring different meanings. and rasa sedih pun different levels. i cannot tolerate betrayal and once ive been betrayed thats it no second chance. but to overcome disappointment.. nxt time just jangan letak hope tinggi sangat =D

    1. True.. Sebab tu i letak gambaran, disappoinment tu orang dah rasa sedih, and at least, there's a word of it but betrayal mcm sucks.. huhu..

  6. Saya tak rasa ada lemon yang boleh rawat sakit dikhianati. Pengkhianat takkan insaf selagi dia sendiri tak pernah dikhianati.

  7. Used to be in that situation..i prefer to throw away the lemon instead of making a lemonade..

    1. The lemon bleeds you, sure you can't proceed with lemonades..

  8. objek di bawah buah lemonade lebih menarik perhatian saya. hehehehehee

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