Chapter 57: The Crumbled Pieces..

September 18, 2017

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There it was.. 
The crumbled pieces of her..
She gathered every broken pieces that he left..
And rebuilt it with the cements of hearts..
Just to ensure that nothing could went through it again..

Years past by...
There were times that it's almost fall over..
But no one manage to breaks the walls that she had made..
Till one day....
"Couldn't you see how sincere I am with you..? Couldn't you please just open your heart for once..?"
Seeing how much the effort that he made..
She lets herself of control..
And allowed him to go through the walls..
With the hope that nothing could goes wrong..

And again..
There it was..
The crumbled pieces of her..
So, once again... 
She gathered every single pieces that were scattered..
Wanting to mend it, trying to build the walls better that it was..

But this time..
It was different..
The pain that she's been suffering..
The wrecked emotions that removed her happiness..
She ignored everything and embrace herself..

Her hearts healed itself better than she expected...
And now she's standing, stronger than before..
And in silence.. 
She whispered to her heart..
"Congratulations, love.. You made it..!"

written by;
-Flavnesz @ Chapters-




17 comments

  1. I am patting my heart while reading this 😂

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    1. Your comment cracks me up, Hanis... 😂😂😂😂

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  2. Good job to her, everybody should be stronger than yesterday...

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    1. Thank you abg Azlan.. Yup.. Everyone definitely should be stronger day by day.. :D

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  3. this make me proud of myself.
    thanks :')

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    1. Naww... *hugs BV*
      You're welcome.. :')

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  4. She should proud with herself as now she standing stronger than before. And I'm proud with her too ❤

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    1. She did proud of herself and thank you kak Ana for sharing the moment with her.. 🤗

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  5. My comment:
    Why dont you write a book.

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    1. My answer:
      I wish I could but then, I wonder wish publisher should I approach for this kind of writing..? haha

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  6. I'm suck at giving comments generally but I suck harder in giving comments on lovely poetry writing like this. There's like nothing to say except, good job! lol

    Btw, your new blog design looks prettayy!

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  7. Tak mampu nak baca, every words bikin sentap trus rasa nak nangis. Haha.

    Btw, beautiful new template! sorry lama tak jejak sini huhu.

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    1. Well, i bet most of us do experience this.. hehe..
      Thank you..! Anis pun lama tak jejak blog Eyqa..

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